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June 23, 2010
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:iconaxeraider70:
So yeah. I like this one!

BUT.

I know the perspective leaves a lot to be desired and it looks awkward in some places. I'm really struggling with this... i can never get the whole thing to come together how i want it. Any suggestions or advice? :\
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~0-Deep-x3r0-0 Jun 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the guns angle looks a lil off like pointed to he right insteas or directly straight. i think if you brougt theangle down and showed a lil more of the barrel and theopening of the gun it'll look better
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~CJdamaster Jun 24, 2010
Fantastic! In my humble opinion, I think the gun needs to be pointed parallel to the rest of her body with maybe more of a grip (maybe fingers a bit higher)

However, I'm sure you have better ideas =p
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Mood: Triumph ~S0LUS Jun 24, 2010   Digital Artist
Make it more of an action shot. Add, say, a bird-eye view of a landscape, more rocket exhaust and random particles, etc.

The pose isn't bad at all, but I personally think her head seems set back a bit (maybe jammed a little, even) and it makes her pose seem more than a little uncomfortable. (Still, we all know what a bitch it is to redo all that much coloring and lines D: )

Still man, lookin' great!
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*Axeraider70 Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i must do this for my next raidergirl image...

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~Jomeaga Jun 24, 2010
How about her diving downwards, rather than that awkward flying
that way the chest and belly will not jut out how they are
So the feet would be above her back
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~madheinrichs2 Jun 23, 2010
I love it.
But the body seems to be in an awkward position to the head. And her right arm seems really small in comparison to her body.
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*Axeraider70 Jun 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's so hard!! for me anyway. XD

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