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It's Practical You Jerk

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told you i'd make something colored :D

Ok let me know how i did on the anatomy type stuff T_T this was me trying without as much reference this time so hope I did well :D

While 70 and Miro were busy sweating it out, Aui came up with special gear for 69 to wear in the heat. When asked to comment on his design, all he said was "it's pratical."

Inspired by Kamina's line from Gurren Lagann, talking about Yoko's lack of clothing ahahaha.
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I'm part of the critique squad on :iconartistcooperative:

your picture was submitted into the critique folder, so I shall be critiquing your picture today :D

What I like
Her expression is great, she looks really happy and proud to be trying on her new uniform XD the detail in the armour is good. I really like the rushed background too, i wish i could do a background quickly to help set the scene so well done for that. Her hair is a fab colour and I love the detail you've added to her hair.

What would I change
Her body shape looks ok to me, but I would lengthen her arms a bit more, to compensate for her long body. Maybe try messing around with shading and lighting a bit more, on the arm thats going towards her face some shading should be placed where the armour is on her shoulder.

I hope I've helped and that I've been fair, overall its a good cell shaded picture you've created XD