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your picture was submitted into the critique folder, so I shall be critiquing your picture today
What I like
Her expression is great, she looks really happy and proud to be trying on her new uniform XD the detail in the armour is good. I really like the rushed background too, i wish i could do a background quickly to help set the scene so well done for that. Her hair is a fab colour and I love the detail you've added to her hair.
What would I change
Her body shape looks ok to me, but I would lengthen her arms a bit more, to compensate for her long body. Maybe try messing around with shading and lighting a bit more, on the arm thats going towards her face some shading should be placed where the armour is on her shoulder.
I hope I've helped and that I've been fair, overall its a good cell shaded picture you've created XD
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ps. did you do the BG like that on purpose?
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still, try experimenting more on shadows //light--ing effects,a nd you'll' be set 2 moon!
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good work, i liked it.
-keep it up!
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I shalls constructively critique?
1-boobs (while some say could be bigger-and they always could be) haha- look great!Cleavage area is much more natural and true to life than other times ive seen you draw it
2- Her torso is a bit too long- making her curves a little tighter, rather than as long as they are now would probably help you to fix this.
3-the curvy defining lines on her stomach are a bit unnatural looking. Since those muscular areas typically wont be -that- defined on girls, I would recommend only using the shaded skin tone to do those, rather than using a black line.
4-on her right arm, I would recommend extending the black line into the skin, closer to the elbow to show the bend. I don't know if that makes sense, but like, if you bend your arm and look at it, (haha) that little line- that goes from where your forearm meets your bicep and continues towards your elbow.
hopefully that was more helpful than "nit-picky"...haha- I just got out of a class crit.
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Also, she needs bigger boobs
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